Think this story is scary enough for you?




One horrible stormy and windy night, Isabella and her friends joined her at the back of her school at midnight to see what had happened to her dead friend that last night. The sat down on the muddy area and waited quietly and still to figure out what they should to. Finally Isabella saw blood foot steps on the floor, so Isabella’s friends followed her away through the cold air. They followed her and followed her but her friends felt like they were not moving a teeny weeny bit. So, Isabella opened the gate and entered the bloody garden.

She looked back and founded a shadow behind her, ” Hellooo Isaabbeellaa”, I want my revenge on what you did to me yesterrrddaayyyyyyy”, she said in a hooweee way. ” What did I do yesterday?”, Isabella asked politely. ” You left me here and ran away without bringing any help for me”, the goat said madly with her face extremely red. Oh i remember (oops), she thought to her self. So Isabella ran and ran but she felt no movement with the ground she was flowing up and up and up and up until she reached death to her self.

” Why are you doing this?”, Isabella asked. ” This is for not helping me from my dreadful death, so that means you will die the same death as me”. So I flowed up with humongous rage and I could not breath from the overflow she gave me up in the air. I could not breathe that I let my self die in disbelieve.

So that means I will you know to my friends……….Death Death Death Death. There is now evil inside me like her……………….. Darkness, I could feel. We both turned into twins with our own two graves behind us with my teady bear with me.

( Freaked out now?)

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3 Responses to “Think this story is scary enough for you?”

  1.   meghnak Says:

    Hi Norma,
    Thanks a lot for keeping in touch…
    Yeah…I’m really freaked out…beleive it or not, I won’t be able to go to the washroom alone this night :(

  2.   Katherine Says:

    Hi Norma,
    its me Katherine and the firat few lines were freaking me out but as it went pretty well though but the last bit was weird….just kidding to you but great job though :)

    Bye: Katherine

  3.   normastar Says:

    Hi Katherine and Megna! I really am scared of the picture and totally scared to stay by my self in the toilet at school!!!! Stay in touch both of you!!!

    :)

    Norma

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