The last i ever saw my parents…..




One dark night i heard my parents chatting together about the atomic bomb that was going to hit next week. I never new what it was about so i just went to the living room where my parents sat near the red fire the lightened up a few minutes ago. “Darling what are you doing down here?” mum said in a strangely voice.

“Well….. i heard you talking about this thing called the atomic…., i said in a weary voice.

“Honey there is this bomb that is going to attack this town and we are just discussing what we are going to do about it like stay or leave, now honey go to bed please, mum said. T stomped my way up the stairs and ran straight into my room. The next day i walked up mum was all sweaty and she was about to faint. When i ran down my mum told me one thing it was that she had the atomic bomb disease, at that moment i was so sad i couldn’t handle it it had to get some peace and quiet. So i ran up to my room and slept. When i got up i found no one there there was a note signed by the police saying “Your parents have died from the atomic bomb disease. I was an orphan at that stage. I… i ….i.. had no where to live, and that was the last time i saw my parents ever.

THE END

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3 Responses to “The last i ever saw my parents…..”

  1.   meghnak Says:

    Hi Norma,
    You’ve got Nadine’s talent in you to write such wonderful stories…or shld I saw she’s got ur talent ? :P
    Lovely story and really touching…I hope this never really happens to any child!

  2.   Naveen Says:

    Hi Norma It’s Naveen. Sorry I took a long time to comment. I’ve been really busy in class. You’ve gotten along really well with your blog, and as MeghnaK said, you really do have Nadine’s talent. By the way that is very touching and I also hpe that never happens to any child.
    I also hope we can be friends and I think we will. Great blog posts. I wish I could be as good as you with my blog posts, you have really gotten into it. Just if you don’t know me I’m 12 years old and I live in New Zealand.
    Ok sorry I have to go. I’ll comment again soon
    See ya
    Naveen
    :)

  3.   meghnak Says:

    Hi once again Norma,
    Cld u tell Naveen on my behalf that ther’s some problem and so I cld not post a comment on his blog. Do tell him also that I think the answer to his riddle is Andrew (as mentioned in the riddle itself!)?????
    I’ll be glad if u cld convey my news!

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